Topic 1 Which Do You Prefer-Living on or out of the Campus?
Which Do You Prefer-Living on or out of the Campus?
As regards the choice between college students' living on and out of the campus，there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who lend their support to living out of the campus argue that this kind of independent life will protect their privacy and help individual development，which will then make college life more diversified and colorful.
By contrast，others hold that college students should live on campus. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion of parents as high as 98. 8 percent believe that collective life will benefit their children in shaping them to be well disciplined. What's more , campus can provide students with a safe living environment and good academic atmosphere.
As far as I am concerned，the best choice is living on campus，by which I can acquire the art of interpersonal communication through living with people from different places.(152词)
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第一段:在模板句引入话题后接着提出首段中心“一些大学生认为住在校外好”，并用protect their privacy和help individual development两个原因来支持段落中心。
(1)protect their privacy保护隐私
(3)diversified and colorful丰富多彩
(4)a safe living environment安全的生活环境
(5)good academic atmosphere好的学术氛围