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英语四级作文分类 比较对照真题范文及点评 04:数字能否带来好运?

lily85 于2015-12-14发布 l 已有人阅读

Topic 4 1998年6月真题

Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运
2.也有些人认为数字和运气无关
3.试说明你的看法

Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

As regards lucky numbers,there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. Some people believe that lucky numbers will bring them good luck. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,a high proportion of people as high as 86. 5 percent spend much money getting their telephone numbers or car numbers to include the number ”8”,which,for them,means making a fortune.

By contrast,others hold that such kind of idea only caters to psychological need and is purely misleading.  Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts. Instead, many count their good fortune on lucky numbers just to get a disappointing result.

As far as I am concerned,I would lend my support to the second opinion because I firmly believe that “Opportunities are only for the prepared mind"•(143词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第一段的一个百分比吸引了阅卷老师的眼球。conduct , a proportion of , spend much money等词、短语的运用,形成良好的第一印象。注意:该篇文章是个例外,将“一句话”放在了第一段,是因为很容易举出数字的例子来说明“有些人认为某些数字会带来好运”的论点,中国人的传统思维中,一想到数字和运气,总会想起8或6等;而相反第二段反对这种观点则不好构思例子。

快捷构思

第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“有些人认为某些数字会带来好运”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,说明大多数的人都会花很多钱让电话号码或车牌号含有8这个数字,希望自己能走运。

第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“有些人认为数字和运气无关”,并用Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts来支持这个观点。

第三段:直接展现自己观点,并简要提出一个原因Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.

美丽词句
(1) caters to psychological need满足心理上的需求
(2) purely misleading完全误导人的
(3) real efforts真正的努力(优于hard work )
(4)just to get a disappointing result而仅仅得到一个失望的结果(不定式在这里表结果,是绝大部分同学不会主动使用的表达)
(5) Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.机会是留给有准备的人的。(谚语的使用也是文章的一个亮点)

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