Topic 3 On Students' Evaluation of Teachers
On Students' Evaluation of Teachers
Recently a brand new system that students evaluate their teachers among universities appears. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion of colleges，98. 5 percent use the new system.
The biggest benefit is that teachers should do their best to improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods in order to meet the needs of their students. In addition, by owing the right to evaluate teachers，students may pay full attention to their classes，which will undoubtedly improve their study performance.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above，we also face several un-avoidable challenges. The students' evaluation of teachers cannot always be objective-it should be combined with evaluation from authority and colleagues. Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.(140词)
毫无疑问，第二段的China Daily和百分比吸引了阅卷老师的眼球。conduct , a proportion of等好词及短语的使用，无疑增加了亮点。
第二段:直接展现段落中心“这种制度的好处”，并用improve not only their specialized knowledge and skills but also their teaching methods和pay full attention to their classes两个原因，来支持这个观点。
第三段:开门见山提出段落中心“这种制度也会带来负面的影响”，并用("cannot always be objective来支持，以一个结果状语从句Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system作为结尾。
(1)specialized knowledge and skills专业知识和技能
(3)pay full attention to集中注意力
(4)Only when we deal with these problems successfully can we benefit most from such a new system.倒装句，高分作文的一种常用句式。