Topic 4 Long Holidays
As regards the necessity of long holidays, there has been a heated discussion among college students. Those who lend their support to it argue that long holidays provide them a better chance to travel around and establish broader vision. In addition, they can take part-time jobs in long holidays，which makes them get closer contact with the society.
By contrast，others hold that students may fail to make good use of long holidays. Instead，they become addicted to various computer games or just sleep a lot. What's worse, the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the amount of money college students spent on traveling during the long holidays from ￥ 368 , 000 , 000 to ￥825,000,000，which undoubtedly raise the economic burden of their family.
As far as I am concerned，I will strike a balance between relaxing myself through traveling or playing games and study.(147词)
第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“长假给大学生带来的好处”，并用provide them a better chance to travel around and establish broader vision和get closer contact with the society两个原因来支持段落中心。
(1) establish broader vision开拓广阔的视野
(2) get closer contact with the society与社会近距离接触
(3)become addicted to…开始对……上瘾
(4) strike a balance between…and…在……和……之间保持平衡(strike优于keep)