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英语四级作文分类 比较对照真题范文及点评 07:校园是否应对游客开放?

Topic 3 2006年1月真题

Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists` You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同
3.我认为……

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists

Nowadays,many famous university campuses have become popular tourist attractions. Take Tsinghua University as an example,the past 5 years has witnessed a steady number of 4,360,000 people visiting the famous university every year.

When it comes to the topic whether it is a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists,different people hold different views.  In the eyes of the group of people arguing for campus opening, the beauty of the campuses will impress the middle students and stimulate them to work harder to get enrolled in such famous universities. However,others hold a negative view about it for too many tourists will definitely disturb the campuses' intellectual atmosphere.

As far as I am concerned,I would lend my support to the second opinion because I firmly believe that university campus should first and foremost be a quiet and peaceful environment for students to study.(150词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第一段的一个数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时使用了witness , steady等好词和visiting分词做后置定语,将形成良好的第一印象。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“名校校园正成为旅游新热点”、。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,举出例子更加形象地说明越来越多的人到名校校园旅游。

第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同”。紧接着列出两种不同的观点,并分别用impress the  middle students and stimulate them to work harder to get enrolled in such famous universities和disturb the campuses' intellectual atmosphere为原因支持。

第三段:直接展现自己观点,并提出一个简要的原因,不做更深层次的展开。

美丽词句
(1)impress sb.给……深刻印象、使铭记
(2) stimulate sb. to work harder激励某人努力学习
(3) get enrolled in被录取
(4) disturb the campuses' intellectual atmosphere破坏学校的学术氛围
(5) first and foremost首要、首先

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