Topic 7 Social Practice
In recent years，more and more college students(house to take part in social practice. According to a recent survey conducted by China Education Ministry，the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the proportion of college students taking social practice from 23. 5 percent to 78. 6 percent.
Social practice will bring great benefits to college students on both their study and daily life. On the one, hand，their close contact with working people might help them improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem. On the other hand，by taking social practice，college students will further realize what their shortcomings are and therefore have a better understanding of the specific aim of their study.
Students should learn to strike a balance between social practice and their own study. Social practice should never he as an excuse of their not studying hard.(147词)
毫无疑问，第一段的China Education Ministry和数据将首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时使用了witness, sharp等好词和taking分词做后置定语，将形成良好的第一印象。
第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“社会实践对大学生学习和生活的好处”，接着用improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem和realize what their shortcomings are and therefore have a better understanding of the specific aim of their study来支持。
(1) bring great benefits带来很大的益处
(2)improve the sense of applying knowledge to practical problem提高运用知识解决实际问题的意识
(3) a better understanding of the specific aim of their study很好地理解学习中的特定目标
(4) strike a balance between... and二在……和……之间保持平衡(strike优于keep)