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英语四级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 08:如何保持健康

Topic 8 Health
1人人都希望健康
2.如何保持健康
3.我是如何保持健康的

Health

Everybody in this world hopes to keep healthy.  Without a good health,one couldn't even live a normal life,let alone a happy life.

There are several ways to keep healthy. To begin with,one should do regular physical exercise. By this,one can not only keep himself in good physical condition but also stay in a good mood every day. In addition,having a balanced diet is also of great importance to keeping healthy. According to a recent survey conducted by WHO,taking too much fat accounts for 34. 7 percent of the diseases that people suffered from in the year of 2006. What's more,one should pay attention not to have too much pressure.

As to me , I play table tennis for an hour every day and I take everything easy,which refreshes both my body and mind and hence keep me stay in a good health.(145词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第二段中的大写字母和数据将首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时该句还使用了survey, conduct等好词,这将给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。

快捷构思

第一段:开门见山展现段落中心“人人都希望健康”。而后用了正反论证的方法,说明健康的好处。

第二段:直接展现段落‘t“心“如何保持健康”。并用《to regular physical exercise和a balanced diet来支持这一中心。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,形象说明健康饮食对健康的重要性。最后呈现另一保持健康的途径:不要有太多的压力。

第三段:直接展现自己观点,并提出简要的一个原因,不做更深层次的展开。

美丽词句

(1)Without a good health,one couldn't even live a normal life, let alone a happy life.正反论证,亮点句式。

(2) regular physical exercise正常的锻炼

(3) good physical condition良好的身体状况

(4)stay in a good mood保持好心情(也可以表达为keep in a good mood)

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