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英语四级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 10:对大学教育目的的认识

Topic 10 The Purpose of College Education
1.目前,中国高等教育不再是少数人享有的教育,拥有大学文凭的人数日益增加
2.大学生失业不再新鲜,因此有人认为读书无用
3.我对大学教育目的的认识

The Purpose of College Education

Nowadays,with the policy of college enrollment expansion in China,higher education is no longer the privilege to the top students. The past decade has witnessed a steady increase in the percentage of people owning college diploma from 8. 3 to 23. 5.

However,every coin has two sides. Every year so many graduates pour into the employment market and greatly intensify the competition in job hunting. Plenty of them remain unemployed. Consequently,“Uselessness of study" prevails among some people who adopt a negative attitude toward higher education and believe it futile to pursue a degree.

As far as I am concerned,the purpose of university education is not only to equip students with knowledge and professional skills,but to cultivate qualified citizens to deal with various challenges with full developed character and talent. Therefore,as college students,we should value the learning opportunity to perfect ourselves for the future competition.(149词)

“一句话”点评

很显然,第一段的两个数据抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时使用了witness , steady等好词及the past decade做主语修辞手段的使用,增加了亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“中国高等教育不再是少数人享有的教育,拥有大学文凭的人数日益增加”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,举出例子更加形象地说明拥有大学文凭的人越来越多。

第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“大学生失业不再新鲜,因此有人认为读书无用”。

第三段:直接展现自己的观点,认为大学教育的目的是:not only to equip  students  with  knowledge and professional skills,but to cultivate qualified citizens to deal with various challenges with full developed character and talent.最后,建议我们应该抓紧学习,为以后的竞争做准备。

美丽词句

(1) the policy of college enrollment expansion大学扩招

(2) pour into the employment market涌人就业市场

(3) intensify the competition in job hunting加剧就业的竞争力

(4) adopt a negative attitude采取消极的态度

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