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英语六级作文分类 比较对照真题范文及点评 05 电子书会取代传统书籍吗?

yexu 于2015-12-15发布 l 已有人阅读

Topic 4 2008年6月真题

Directions; For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a com­position on the topic Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese :

1.随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多

2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书,理由是……

3.我的看法

Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?

With the rapid development of information technology, E-books have wound their way into our daily life and have gained increasing popularity mong common people. According to a recent survey conducted by CPB—Chinese Publishing Bureau, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the total kind of E-books from 3,400 to 856,000.

Some people hold that E-books will replace traditional books sooner or later. To begin with, all the E-books can be downloaded from the Internet directly,most of which are free of charge,while the traditional books in bookstores are much more expensive. What’s more, reading by computer instead of by paper has become a fashion in our life and therefore E-books will undoubtedly appeal to more people.

As far as I am concerned, nowadays traditional books are still the leading means of reading. However, with the further development of information technology, E-books will surely take the place of traditional books in the near future. (157 词)

一句话点评

毫无疑问,第一段的两个数据和大写字母CPB将吸引阅卷老 师的眼球,同时使用了 decade,witness,sharp等好词和the past decade作主语的拟人修辞手段,这将给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印 象。注意:现象/观点阐释型的第一段通常是说一个现象,该现象 基本上用一句话就可描述完。为了增加该段落的内容,建议“一句 话”放在第一段,具体现象呈现后,用数例支持前面的现象。而且, 只要是现象,都是可以轻松地构造出具体的数例的。

快捷构思

如本范文第一、二、三段篇幅对比和划线部分模板词句所示, 现象/观点阐释型的整篇构思清晰明了。各段落首句皆为段落中 心句(即题目所给提纲),完全符合“黄金3原则”的谋篇原则。首段用“ 一句话”数例来支持,第二段为主体段分层次展开’最后一段 为非主体段,提出中心后简单支持即可。
第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“随着信息技术的发展,电子 图书越来越多”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展 示,更加形象具体地说明电子图书种类的增多。
第二段 开门见山展现段落中心“有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书”,并用 E-books can be downloaded from the Internet 和 reading by computer has become a fashion 两个原因来支持段落中心。
第三段:直接展现自己的观点:如今怎么样,将来又怎么样。

美丽词句

1.wind one’s way into 闯人,进入

2.gain increasing popularity受到越来越多的欢迎

3.be free of charge 免费

4.appeal to有吸引力的

5. take the place of 取代

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