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英语六级作文分类 比较对照真题范文及点评 09:阅读经典的重要性

yexu 于2015-12-16发布 l 已有人阅读

Topic 1 2006年12月真题

Directions : For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a com­position on the topic The Importance of Reading Classics. You
should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese :

阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要

现在愿意阅读经典书籍的人却越来越少,原因是

我们大学生应该怎么做

The Importance of Reading Classics

It is widely acknowledged that classic reading is of great impor­tance to personal growth of people. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily,a high proportion (86.5 percent) of readers admit that reading classics helps them deepen the understanding of life.

However, people in contemporary society seldom enjoy and appre­ciate those classics, which stems from various factors. To be^in with, due to the quickening pace of modern life, a great many people fail to devote enough time to reading classics. What’s more, a growing num­ber of young people prefer to gather information from Internet, televi­sion news reports and magazines. As a result,classics lose the support of the youth.

As college students, we should know that classical works present the precious accumulation of wisdom and knowledge beyond the limitation of time and space. Therefore,it may be safe to say that reading classics is a good way to promote our nation and ourselves as well. (158 词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第一段的Chinu Daily和数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球, 同时使用了 conduct, a high proportion of, deepen the understanding of life等好词及短语和admit后的宾语从句,将形成良好的第一印象。

快捷构思

如本范文第一、二、三段篇幅对比和画线部分模板词句所示, 问题分析型的整篇构思清晰明了。各段落首句皆为段落中心句 (即题目所给提纲),完全符合“黄金3原则”的谋篇原则。
第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“阅读经典书籍对人的成长 至关重要”。而后“一句话”数例为具体展现。
第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“现在愿意阅读经典书籍的人 越来越少有几个原因”,接着分层次给出两个原因支 持段落中心。
第三段:直接展现段落中心“我们大学生应该怎么做”,并简要 阐明其对大学生的好处,不作更深层次的展开。

美丽词句

1.be widely acknowledged 被广泛承认

2.be of great importance to对 很重要(优于经常用的bevery important to)

3.stem......... from来自于,源于

4.beyond the limitation of time and space 超越时空

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